- Im adding and challenging brandt within my paper, but I need to do more and use more evidence from brand and from litnars.
- Because my draft was lacking in completion I have barely a tenth of the info and evidence I need to make a good paper.
- I need to add in info/evidence from at least one more scholarly journal and at least three litnars.
- Engaging lit aquistion sample barclays work
- Revised Paragraphs