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- My group and I concur that my paper is pretty solid pointwise but definitely needs some work explaining those points. I have plenty of quotations but I need to learn how to sandwich them better.
- I have many quotations and use them well but fail to introduce some of them. My group has said that I contrast Gee and Cuddy very well. I also state my own opinion within my paper.
- My group members also say that my paper would be better if I fleshed out the argument between Gee and Cuddy more and in greater detail
