Intro. I didn’t change my intro at all. I didn’t change it because in my first draft I did not have one so I added it to my final and I believe I did a decent job explaining what my paper was about without going into to much detail.
Evi and Exp. I added many more meaningful quotes and other evidence from the texts. I mainly focused on Gee in both my First and Final drafts but I added more on Cuddy into my Final. I also contrasted the two texts as well as compared them a little in my Final.
Reorganization. I moved a paragraph on gee above a paragraph on Cuddy. I did this because for some reason I at first explained Gee some, then Cuddy, and then went back to Gee. So instead of that, I moved my full explanation of Gee in order.
New Paragraphs. I certainly made my paper longer. I added an actual intro and conclusion, as well as another smaller paragraph on Cuddy.
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